議論文及其範文點評
2023-07-03 01:06:13
議論文要有自己的觀點,要有論證過程,強調觀點。常用的句型如:
1.論點
Computerisimportant.
WemustlearnEnglishwell.
It'sveryimportantforusto...
Inmyopinion...
2.論證過程常用一些銜接詞可使文章讀起來流暢,緊湊。如:
Firstly...Secondly…,Lastly...Aboveall等
3.結尾強調觀點,最好用不同的句型來表達相同的觀點,如:
Sowemust...
Soit'sveryimportantforusto...
Ibelieve...
Weshould...
範文1
WhyAreTreesImportant?
Treesareveryimportanttous.Doyouknowwhy?Letmetellyou.
Treestakeincarbondioxidefromtheairandmakeoxygen.That'simportant.Peopleandanimalsneedoxygentolive.Manysmallanimalsandinsectsliveinthetrees.Someofthemalsogetfoodfromtrees.Treescanalsostopwaterandsoilfromgoingaway.Ifwehavealotoftrees,westopdesertsfrombeinglarge.Ithinkthisisveryimportant.Youknow,treesaregreen.Theycanmakeourcountryevenmorebeautiful.
Treesareourgoodfriends.Weshouldplantmoretreesandtakegoodcareofthem.
點評:文章先闡明論點,接著論證,最後重申自己的觀點。
範文2
It'sOurDutyToProtectOurEnvironment
It'sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Wherewelive?Theearth.Theearthistheonlyoneplacewelivein.Soyouknowhowimportanttheenvironmentis.Butnow,somepeopleareharmingtheenvironment,likecuttingdowntrees,drawingpicturesonpublicwalls,litteringontotheground.It'sterribleifwestilldoit.Now,it'stimeforallthepeopleinthesocietytoprotecttheenvironment.It'sourduty.Itneedseachofustomakeacontributiontoimprovingtheenvironment.Weshouldmakeourenvironmentmoreandmorebeautiful.
點評:作者多用學過的詞語不但保證了正確,還鞏固了所學的知識,並且注意句型的多樣化,如長句,短句,疑問句,使用了「if,so,now,but」等詞,整篇文章讀起來朗朗上口。實際上,寫文章就像串珠子,連接詞就在於把一個個單詞串起來。